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2019-09-26 · 첨삭 강사 Gina

학생이 쓴 원문

really would like to say thank you to my family. When I was younger, i make went through the roof to my family. So i\'m going to give grace to my family.

강사 첨삭

Hello, [이름]!

Thank you for making your homework.^^
See you later in class.

~Teacher Gina

I really would like to say thank you to my family.
>> CORRECT.
When I was younger, i make went through the roof to my family.
>> When I was younger, I went through the roof because to my family.
So i\'m going to give grace to my family.
>> So, this time, I\'m going to give grace to my family.

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