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would like to try a bungee jumping. And I want to try a sky diving in a bungee jumping. I\'m scared of heights. But i want to get rid of my scared of heights from doing that.
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Hello, [이름]!
I appreciate you for submitting your homework.
I hope that you can try these activities in the future as you challenge yourself. ^^
~Teacher Gina
>> I would like t to try bungee jumping.
And I want to try a sky diving in a bungee jumping.
>> And I want to try sky diving as well.
I\'m scared of heights.
>> CORRECT.
But i want to get rid of my scared of heights from doing that.
>> But I want to get rid of my fear of heights by doing that.
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