I
학생이 쓴 원문
would like to a big car as the ‘Jeep’. and a electric car as a ‘Tesla model x’. Because a jeep car is my most favorite car since middle school. And a Tesla cars are good for environment and a our future. That’s why i want these.
강사 첨삭
Good evening, [이름]!
Thank you so much.
I hope that in the future, you\'ll be able to have these cars.
I actually searched and looked for their pictures. They really look awesome! ^^
~Teacher Gina
>> I would like to have a big car such as the ‘Jeep’ and an electric car such as a ‘Tesla model x’.
Because a jeep car is my most favorite car since middle school.
>> CORRECT.
And a Tesla cars are good for environment and a our future.
>> And Tesla cars are good for the environment and for our future.
That’s why i want these.
>> CORRECT.
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