I
학생이 쓴 원문
like a making new friends naturally, without distaste. And I would like to share many their minds who’re every one and understand their’s minds.
강사 첨삭
Good evening, [이름]!
Thank you so much for submitting your homework. ^^
I\'m happy that you like making friends with other people.
That\'s a very good trait.
~Teacher Gina
>> I like making new friends naturally, without disliking them.
And I would like to share many their minds who’re every one and understand their’s minds.
>> And I would like to share what\'s on their minds as well as what I have so that we\'ll be understanding each other.
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