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2019-10-25 · 첨삭 강사 Gina

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want to play the piano and the guitar. And they are basic musical instruments of composition. So if i’m good at playing these musical instruments, I would like to learn more composition.

강사 첨삭

Good evening, [이름]!

I appreciate you for submitting your homework.
I hope that you\'ll be able to play these instruments so that you can also create or compose your music. ^^

~Teacher Gina

I want to play the piano and the guitar. 
>> CORRECT.
And they are basic musical instruments of composition. 
>> And they are the basic musical instruments used for compositions.
So if i’m good at playing these musical instruments, I would like to learn more composition.
>> So if i’m good at playing these musical instruments, I would like to learn more compositions.

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