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think all kind of exercising will make me fun. I love to do activating with the my body. and if i don’t have a job that kind of activating, I’m going to do that.
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Hello, [이름]!
Good evening!
Thank you for submitting your homework. ^^
I think being active gives us a lot of health benefits as well. It\'s really nice . ^^
~Teacher Gina
>> I think all kinds of exercises will be fun to me.
I love to do activating with the my body.
>> I love to do active activities with my body.
and if i don’t have a job that kind of activating, I’m going to do that.
>> If I don\'t have an active job, I\'m going to do that.
>> Or: If I don\'t have a job which is active, I\'ll try to [이름]ge it into one.
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