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학생이 쓴 원문
don’t know that history about Halloween. I find that many these ghosts come to us at the day, And we wouldn’t get caught. So we should [이름]ge ghosts. that’s why we take some costumes.
강사 첨삭
Hello, [이름]!
Thank you so much for sending your thoughts about Halloween. ^^
I really appreciate it.
See you later.
~Teacher Gina
>> CORRECT.
I find that many these ghosts come to us at the day, And we wouldn’t get caught.
>> I find that many of these ghosts come to us in the day and they can\'t get caught.
So we should [이름]ge ghosts. that’s why we take some costumes.
>> So we should [이름]ge ourselves to ghosts, that\'s why we have some costumes.
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