I admire agricultural culture.
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Hi Rosie! I am interested in learning Korean culture. And, I\'m so happy that you shared something about agriculture in your country. I hope that you\'ll more about your culture. Until next time!
I admire agricultural culture.
>>Correct
>>Or
>>Admiring my country\'s agriculture
We Koreans are agricultural people.
>>Correct
>>Or
>>Korean people are agricultural.
We have lived in Korean traditional house.
>>We have lived in a Korean traditional house.
And we eat rice which is grown in the field.
>>Correct
>>Or
>>And we eat rice which is grown in the field and the staple food in Korea.
And we have entertained the western culture like U.S. and Europe from T.V.
>>And we have entertained western culture like the U.S. and Europe.
And when I was a kid I often eat noodles in the near chinese restraunt.
>> And when I was a kid I often eat noodles in the near Chinese restaurant.
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