I admire grandmother.
학생이 쓴 원문
she cared me at very long time.
actually, my family cared me too.
but she protected about my weak things.
so i will protect my important people like the she too.
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!
Thank you for submitting your composition.
I really admire you for caring so much about your grandmother and family. ^^
~Teacher Gina
I admire grandmother.
she cared me at very long time.
actually, my family cared me too.
but she protected about my weak things.
so i will protect my important people like the she too.
actually, my family cared me too.
but she protected about my weak things.
so i will protect my important people like the she too.
>> I admire my grandmother.
She took care of me for a very long time.
Actually, my family cook care of me too.
But she protected me from my weaknesses, so I will also protect the important people in my life like her too.
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