I agree that youth is a state of mind.
학생이 쓴 원문
I agree that youth is a state of mind.
Even when I get older, I think I\'ll have various things that I want to achieve.
For example, I want to have long straight hair, and dance.
Therefore, no matter how old I am, when I live passionately, that is youth.
강사 첨삭
Hi Kara!
Even when I get older, I think I\'ll have various things that I want to achieve.
For example, I want to have long straight hair, and dance.
>> For example, I want to have long straight hair. I also want to dance.
Therefore, no matter how old I am, when I live passionately, that is youth.
Age is just a number, as they say.
We can always be youthful.
Andrea
I agree that youth is a state of mind.
>> Correct
Even when I get older, I think I\'ll have various things that I want to achieve.
>> Correct
For example, I want to have long straight hair, and dance.
>> For example, I want to have long straight hair. I also want to dance.
Therefore, no matter how old I am, when I live passionately, that is youth.
>> Correct
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