I agree with attitude to trust their first imprressions.

2020-02-13 · 첨삭 강사 Gemma

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ESSAY: Some people trust their first impressions about a person\'s character because they believe these judgments are generally correct. Other people do not judge a person\'s character quickly because they believe first impressions are often wrong. Compare these two attitudes. Which attitude do you agree with? Support your choice with specific examples. I agree with attitude which rust their first impressions about a person\'s character. Because I believe that someone\'s life is reflecting their face, wording which they use, gesture, and so on. So I can catch someone\'s characteristics within few minutes. And most of the cases it was right. I think that\'s the reason why people can feel nervous when they meet someone who you are meet first time. So I believe that first impression is very important to make a relationship with other people because many people judge someone\'s characteristics with first impressions.

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ESSAY: Some people trust their first impressions about a person\'s character because they believe these judgments are generally correct. Other people do not judge a person\'s character quickly because they believe first impressions are often wrong. Compare these two attitudes. Which attitude do you agree with? Support your choice with specific examples.

I agree with attitude which rust their first impressions about a person\'s character.

>>> I agree with the attitude of trusting first impressions about a person\'s character.
 Because I believe that someone\'s life is reflecting their face, wording which they use, gesture, and so on.

>>> Because I believe that someone\'s life reflects on his face, and speech which they use gesture, and so on.

So I can catch someone\'s characteristics within few minutes.

>>> CORRECT

 And most of the cases it was right.

>>>  And in most cases, it am right.

I think that\'s the reason why people can feel nervous when they meet someone who you are meet first time. 

>>> I think that\'s the reason why people could feel nervous when they meet someone for the first time. 
So I believe that first impression is very important to make a relationship with other people because many people judge someone\'s characteristics with first impressions.

>>> CORRECT

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