I agree with gay marriage
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If you love each other so much, then you would want to stay with your lover for your whole lifetime.
>> If you love each other so much, then you would want to stay together for the rest of your lives.
Actually, even if maximum time limit of humen life is 8o years, it is too short to feel each other\'s love.
>> Actually, even if the maximum time limit of human life is 80 years, it is too short to feel each other\'s love.
Because Our love is not just static, but also it grows up, so you wiil find your maturing love every time, and you will be suprised by it\\\'s profundness everyday.
>> Because our love is not just static, but also it grows up, so you will find your love maturing every time, and you will be suprised by its profundness everyday.
LIke wine. And I think that all the couples who genuinely love each other have the right to taste this happiness.
>> Like wine, I think that all the couples who genuinely love each other have the right to taste this happiness.
Of course gay couples are not exception. Therefore I agree with gay marriage regardless of my denomination.
>> Of course gay couples are not an exception. Therefore I agree with gay marriage regardless of my denomination.
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