I agree with Henry\'s opinion!
학생이 쓴 원문
I agree with Henry. Henry said that it\'s better for us to try something because at our age we often don\'t know what we want to do yet. When you do various volunteer activities, you will see a lot of problems in society or things that need to be improved. For example, you can see that there are so many selfish people who think only of themselves among the many people who pick up street garbage. Volunteer in this way is a good activity that gives us a lot of realization and has a big impact on the future. Don\'t just think of it is a waste of time, why doesn\'t think of it as a time to do various helpful things that we couldn\'t normally do?
강사 첨삭
Hi Maria!
I agree with you and Henry. Other important responsibilities come when you do things outside the classroom. I am sure that just like Henry, you can try to overcome some of the real life situations you may encounter when you grow older by making yourself available when other people need help.
So, stay being helpful and kind. Thank you for this very good answer. See you soon!
-T. Donna =)
>> Correct!
When you do various volunteer activities, you will see a lot of problems in society or things that need to be improved.
>> Correct!
For example, you can see that there are so many selfish people who think only of themselves among the many people who pick up street garbage.
>> Correct!
Volunteer in this way is a good activity that gives us a lot of realization and has a big impact on the future.
>> Volunteer in this way is a good activity that gives us a lot of realization and has a big impact on the future.
Don\'t just think of it is a waste of time, why doesn\'t think of it as a time to do various helpful things that we couldn\'t normally do?
>> Don\'t just think of it is a waste of time, why don\'t think of it as a time to do various helpful things that we couldn\'t normally do?
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