I agree with the latter opinion.
학생이 쓴 원문
I agree with the latter opinion. Of course, the luxury goods can be better quality than other goods. But I don\'t think that they are worthy of that price. I think most of people, especially young women, want to other people tp see that they can afford to buy them.
강사 첨삭
Happy Tuesday, Ju [이름]. Thank you once again for your homework. You were able to express your ideas really well. I believe these days there are non-luxury goods that are affordable and are high in quality. We just need to know where to look. Have a wonderful evening. ~Teacher Jane c\",)
I agree with the latter opinion.
>> CORRECT =)
Of course, the luxury goods can be better quality than other goods.
>> Of course, luxury goods can have better quality than other goods.
But I don\'t think that they are worthy of that price.
>> But I do not think they are worth the price.
I think most of people, especially young women, want to other people tp see that they can afford to buy them.
>> I think most people, especially young women, want other people to see that they can afford to buy them.
I agree with the latter opinion.
>> CORRECT =)
Of course, the luxury goods can be better quality than other goods.
>> Of course, luxury goods can have better quality than other goods.
But I don\'t think that they are worthy of that price.
>> But I do not think they are worth the price.
I think most of people, especially young women, want to other people tp see that they can afford to buy them.
>> I think most people, especially young women, want other people to see that they can afford to buy them.
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