I almost don't use abroad delivery service.

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~~ Teacher Sharon

If I use a abroad delivery service, it will be an internet shopping.

>> If I would use a delivery service to send packages abroad, it will definitely be internet shopping.
Old times when I was before earning money, I use much it a internet shopping mall.

>>Back when I was still earning money, I used internet shopping a lot.

It\'s fun and easy to enjoying shopping.

>> It\'s a fun and easy way to shop.
When I was young, There was not a delivery service except an post office.

>> When I was young, there was no delivery service except for the post office. 
Nowaday it become an old my memory that I used to.

>> Nowadays, this is just an old memory for me.