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2015-06-24 · 첨삭 강사 Charry

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Still of smoking for about 20years. Sometimes smoking is good , when it's not going well or a bit gloomy. It's perfect. The more stories...... when it's rain or want to see that broke up old that person.

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Hi, [이름]! Thank you for writing in our composition board. I don\'t smoke because I have asthma. It runs in our family.My cousins have it too. I exercise a lot because I would like to keep my lungs healthy. Smoking is bad for me. I also have an aunt and an uncle who died because of lung cancer. They were smokers. That\'s why I am so afraid of trying and learning how to smoke. It would be best for you if you try to control it. It will do good for your health. ^^I\'m concerned about you and I want you to stay healthy. Maintain a healthy lifestyle, okay?I will see you again tomorrow [이름]! ^^I can\'t wait to talk to you again. I think our class time is too short. I would like to talk to you more.  :)Have a good day at work. Take care and God bless. ~Teacher Charry~ Still of smoking for about 20years. >> I have been smoking for about 20 years.Sometimes smoking is good , when it\'s not going well or a bit gloomy. >> Sometimes, smoking is good for me. I smoke when I\'m stressed or when I feel a bit gloomy.It\'s perfect. >> CORRECT! OR >> It calms me down. The more stories......when it\'s rain or want to see that broke up old that person. >> [Did you mean]: Aside from that, I smoke when it\'s raining or when I think about the past.

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