I am a firefighter(2)

2012-09-03 · 첨삭 강사 Aurora

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Fire fighters are very brave. They fight fires. They put out fires. Some are put out fires and Others find save people! And than drivers drive very fast and very careful! They always train themselves, so they finish his work well^^

강사 첨삭

HI! Thank you so much for your composition. You did a great job! Keep it up! I appreciate your effort in studying English. Don\'t give up in learning English.^^ T.Meg Here are my corrections for you: Fire fighters are very brave. >> Correct!They fight fires. >> Correct! They put out fires. >> Correct!Some are put out fires and Others find save people! >>  Some put out fires and others save people.And than drivers drive very fast and very careful! >> And the drivers  drive very fast and carefully.They always train themselves, so they finish his work well^^ >> They always train so that they can do their work well.

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