I am a korean so I am not familiar with conversation face to face with foreigner.
학생이 쓴 원문
Face to face conversation is thought to me as same as conversation talking without watching.
I had a multimedia chatting with computer long times ago.
It is same as telephone chatting.
I don\'t mind who is talking to me even if I can\'t see the face.
In old times, there is no computer so we can\'t talk watching the each other\'s face.
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Thank you for your composition.
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~~ Teacher Sharon
Face to face conversation is thought to me as same as conversation talking without watching.
>> I have always thought that face to face conversation and chatting are similar.
I had a multimedia chatting with computer long times ago.
I had a multimedia chatting with computer long times ago.
>> I chatted with people using my computer a long time ago.
It is same as telephone chatting.
It is same as telephone chatting.
>> It is the same as talking over the phone.
I don\'t mind who is talking to me even if I can\'t see the face.
I don\'t mind who is talking to me even if I can\'t see the face.
>> I don\'t mind not being able to see the person I\'m speaking with.
In old times, there is no computer so we can\'t talk watching the each other\'s face.
In old times, there is no computer so we can\'t talk watching the each other\'s face.
>> In the old times, there was no computer so we couldn\'t talk while looking at each other\'s faces like we do now.
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