I am a salaryman (woman?).

2010-09-27 · 첨삭 강사 lei

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It is becoming more and more difficult to live on my small salary. I want to transfer to another company but it is difficult too. Specially women are trouble with getting a new job because of marrige and dilivery. I planned for the future to study an education but my boy friend didn't like that. He wanted to get married to me in two years. If I studied we have to postpone our wedding. I am so sorry that he is somewhat selfish. so now, I have a extra job for a living instead of preparing to go to graduate school. It is teaching korean language to a high school student. sometimes I am so tired but It is fruitful and to be in easy financial circumstance. so I'll do my work hard.^^

강사 첨삭

Hi J!! I didn't know that you had a part time job. Well that's nice, but it would be better if you will do the things that will make you happy. I think your boyfriend loves you so much and he is afraid to loose you that's why he wanted to get married early. ^^ Anyways, just enjoy life okay. Don't get stressed. Lei :-)   It is becoming more and more difficult to live with my small salary.>>correct!I want to transfer to another company but it is difficult too.>>correct!Specially women are trouble with getting a new job because of marrige and dilivery.>>specially that women are havingtrouble getting a new job because of issues with marriage and pregnancy.I planned for the future to study an education but my boy friend didn't like that.>>correct!He wanted to get married to me in two years.>>He wanted to marry me in two years time.If I studied we have to postpone our wedding.>>If I will study, we have to postpone our wedding.I am so sorry that he is somewhat selfish.>>correct!so now, I have an extra job for a living instead of preparing to go to graduate school.>>correct!It is teaching korean language to a high school student.>>correct!sometimes I am so tired but It is fruitful and to be in easy financial circumstance.>>Sometimes, I get so tured but it is fruitful and it is an easy source of financial income.so I'll do my work hard.^^ >>correct!

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