I am a worried and maximum list person
학생이 쓴 원문
Yes, I did,
I Always packed toooo much, because I prepare to some happen are suddenly becoming
I worried about something\'s happen.
I usually said, \"If\"
For example, If A suddenly heavy rains a lot, we need umbella or extra clothes, extra shoes, rain coat etc..
So, I always packed over luggage and then it is going to over weight.
When, I visit to vietnam for a conference, I had to paid over charge to my carrier.
I already packed my personal stuff and add some souviner and shopping something.
I\'m a Maximum list person kkk
강사 첨삭
Wow [이름]!
I do pack heavy too.
But not as heavy as yours - hahaha.
I have learned to be a minimalist when it comes to travelling.
Maybe you will learn it too, someday :)
Yes, I did,
>>> Yes, I do!
I Always packed toooo much, because I prepare to some happen are suddenly becoming
>>> I always packed too much. Because I prepare for something.
I worried about something\'s happen.
>>> I was afraid something would happen.
I usually said, \"If\"
>>> I usually say \"if\".
For example, If A suddenly heavy rains a lot, we need umbella or extra clothes, extra shoes, rain coat etc..
>>> For example, what if it suddenly rain and we need umbrella, rain cot and extra clothes.
So, I always packed over luggage and then it is going to over weight.
>>> So I always pack my things and I think it\'s going to get too heavy.
When, I visit to vietnam for a conference, I had to paid over charge to my carrier.
>>> When I visited Vietnam for a meeting, I had to pay the overcharge to the airline.
I already packed my personal stuff and add some souviner and shopping something.
>>> I already packed my personal items, added souvenirs, and went shopping.
I\'m a Maximum list person kkk
>>> I\'m the \"Always Ready\" kind of person.
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