I am a young man.
학생이 쓴 원문
I am not old yet.
I have a lot of dreams to pursue.
Sixty years is a long time.
When one becomes sixty he can almost do everything that he can.
I have no one to reach that among my family as long as I know.
Thanks for reading.
Bye.
강사 첨삭
Great job in doing your homework. Continue improving your writing and grammar skills. See you in our class later.
I am not old yet.
>>>CORRECT!
OR>>>I am not yet old.
When one becomes sixty he can almost do everything that he can.
>>>When one becomes sixty years old, he can almost do everything that he can.
I have no one to reach that among my family as long as I know.
>>>I have no one to reach that but my family for as long as I know.
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