I am always busy
학생이 쓴 원문
I was a very very busy and unlucky yesterday.
I went to skhynix by company but. I wasn\'t busy morning. but I got a call from other customer.
This was seoul cloud center. I contracted one month ago.
My customer promised If he needed my support , he called me before two days.
but he called before two hours and he said \"I am emergency situation, you must support now \".
so I delayed today job and I went there.
distance my home from skhynix was about one 100 km .
distance customer office and skhyix was about 150 km.
so I took a taxi and I went to my home and I drove my car.
Maybe it was about two hours. Taxi fare was about 80 dollars .
When I arrived there. He told me the schedule was changed to next day.
I need a new engineer so I have found someone before 3 month ago but I couldn\'t find anyone.
The engineer of my skill was a small in korea.
I have a several big deal next year. I am worry of that .
강사 첨삭
Hello Sir John. Thank you for this.
I was a very very busy and unlucky yesterday.
>>> I was quite busy and unlucky yesterday.
I went to skhynix by company but. I wasn\'t busy morning. but I got a call from other customer.
>>> I went to skhynix and had a busy morning, then I got a call from another customer.
>>> I went to skhynix and had a busy morning, then I got a call from another customer.
This was seoul cloud center. I contracted one month ago.
>>> This was in Seoul cloud center whom I contracted a month ago.
My customer promised If he needed my support , he called me before two days.
>>> This was in Seoul cloud center whom I contracted a month ago.
My customer promised If he needed my support , he called me before two days.
>>> My customer promised than if he needs my help he would contact me 2 days prior.
but he called before two hours and he said \"I am emergency situation, you must support now \".
>>> But, he called me 2 hours before and said he is in an emergency situation and needed my help badly.
so I delayed today job and I went there.
but he called before two hours and he said \"I am emergency situation, you must support now \".
>>> But, he called me 2 hours before and said he is in an emergency situation and needed my help badly.
so I delayed today job and I went there.
>>> So I delayed my job that day and went there.
distance my home from skhynix was about one 100 km .
distance my home from skhynix was about one 100 km .
>>> The distance from my house to SKHynix was about 100 km.
distance customer office and skhyix was about 150 km.
distance customer office and skhyix was about 150 km.
>>> The distance between the customer\'s office and skhyix was about 150 km.
so I took a taxi and I went to my home and I drove my car.
>>> So I took a taxi to my home and I drove my car.
>>> So I took a taxi to my home and I drove my car.
Maybe it was about two hours. Taxi fare was about 80 dollars .
>>> It was probably about two hours and the taxi fare was 80 dollars.
When I arrived there. He told me the schedule was changed to next day.
>>> When I arrived there, he told me the schedule was changed to the next day.
When I arrived there. He told me the schedule was changed to next day.
>>> When I arrived there, he told me the schedule was changed to the next day.
I need a new engineer so I have found someone before 3 month ago but I couldn\'t find anyone.
>>> I need a new engineer so I have tried looking for someone 3 months ago but I couldn\'t find anyone.
The engineer of my skill was a small in korea.
>>> There are only few engineers with my skill in Korea.
I have a several big deal next year.
I have a several big deal next year.
>>> I have several big deals next year.
I am worry of that .
>>> I am worried about that.
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