I am always happy.
학생이 쓴 원문
I am happy when I got my birthday. Especially when I got a bitrhday congraturation cake.
I am happy when I am riding a bicycle because it is my hobby to ride it.
I was happy when I go aboard first to Europe.
I am always happy even this time when I write a something in computer.
I am happy because this is summer.
Thanks for reading.
Bye.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Wee!
Thanks for doing your homework!
I hope you are having a great day!
Talk to you later ☺
I am happy when I got my birthday.
>> I am happy on my birthday.
Especially when I got a bitrhday congraturation cake.
>> Especially when I receive a birthday cake.
>> Especially when I receive a birthday cake.
I am happy when I am riding a bicycle because it is my hobby to ride it.
>> I am happy when I am riding a bicycle because it is my hobby.
>> I am happy when I am riding a bicycle because it is my hobby.
I was happy when I go aboard first to Europe.
>> I was happy when I went abroad for the first time.
>> I was happy when I went abroad for the first time.
I am always happy even this time when I write a something in computer.
>> I am always happy even at this time that I am writing something in my computer.
>> I am always happy even at this time that I am writing something in my computer.
I am happy because this is summer.
>> I am happy because it is the summer season!
>> I am happy because it is the summer season!
Thanks for reading.
Bye.
Bye.
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