I am always miss you~
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I will tell you my opinion about couple to live together without marrying.
I have heard of the couple to live together without marrying.
Some years ago, I opposed that couple.
I thought it is an irresponsible attitude.
But now is, I am 29 years old^^;.. My opinion shifted over some years.
Because I know that we can't select best choice.
So, I think a live together without marrying will be another option(next best things).
But I don't want it^^. Just I can understand them now.
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Hi Mi [이름]!
I will surely miss you, too!
Anyway, your perception about live-in partners is great! It’s good that you already have a deeper understanding about it and you don’t judge couples who chose to live that way. I guess that we all have the freedom to choose for our own welfare. Thank you so much for sharing your thoughts with me. Good luck to you and always take care! ^_^
I am always miss you~
>> I will surely miss you
I will tell you my opinion about couple to live together without marrying.
>> I want to share to you my opinion about couples living in together without marrying.I have heard of the couple to live together without marrying.
>> I heard that it is already common for couples to live together without marrying.
Some years ago, I opposed that couple.
>> I used to disagree with those couples.
I thought it is an irresponsible attitude.
>> I thought that, it was unethical.
But now is, I am 29 years old^^;..My opinion shifted over some years.
>> But now that I am 29 years old, my perception have changed.
Because I know that we can't select best choice.
>> Because I now believe that we have the freedom to choose on our own.
So, I think a live together without marrying will be another option(next best things).
>> So I think living together without marrying can also be a good option for couples.But I don't want it^^. Just I can understand them now.
>> But I won’t practice it. I just have a wider understanding about it now.
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