I am always proud of myself!

2020-12-29 · 첨삭 강사 Sharon

학생이 쓴 원문

I always regard I\'m proud of myself. I do my best to do everything I been given, and I\'m always honest with everything. In addition, I am trying to love everyone and practicing living by helping and giving. So I am proud of myself when I think about this life. Of course, the reason I can do all these is because God is with me.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름] Ha!
I wish you well in your quest to be a better person.
I hope you can make a difference in other people\'s lives.
Looking forward to your growth as a person.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
I always regard I\'m proud of myself.
>> I always feel proud of myself.
I do my best to do everything I been given, and I\'m always honest with everything.
>> I do my best in everything that I\'m given, and I\'m always honest about everything.
In addition, I am trying to love everyone and practicing living by helping and giving.
>> In addition, I am trying to love everyone and live well by helping and giving.
So I am proud of myself when I think about this life.
>> Correct
Of course, the reason I can do all these is because God is with me.
>> Correct

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