I am ambitious and young enough to achieve my goal.
학생이 쓴 원문
My goal is too high to achieve and it\'s too ideal and not realistic and it\'s rather a dream than real.
Because I am too young comparing to my well known people.
Bees are not the goal of my life.
We need it to keep our goal in mind.
The goal of my life is not money but love.
Thanks for reading.
Bye.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Wee!
Thank again for doing your homework ^^
I hope you are having a great night. ☺
My goal is too high to achieve and it\'s too ideal and not realistic and it\'s rather a dream than real.
>> My goal is too difficult to achieve and it\'s too ideal and not realistic and it\'s rather a dream than reality.
>> My goal is too difficult to achieve and it\'s too ideal and not realistic and it\'s rather a dream than reality.
Because I am too young comparing to my well known people.
>> It\'s because I am too young compared to well-known people.
>> It\'s because I am too young compared to well-known people.
Bees are not the goal of my life.
>> CORRECT
>> CORRECT
We need it to keep our goal in mind.
>> CORRECT
>> CORRECT
The goal of my life is not money but love.
>> My goal in life is not to have a lot of money but to be in love.
>> My goal in life is not to have a lot of money but to be in love.
Thanks for reading.
Bye.
Bye.
>> CORRECT
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