i am back.~
학생이 쓴 원문
Good morning. Lei.~ it's me . i am back from long blank.
yesterday, i had an appointment at lunch break too. so i postponed our class again.
Anyways. how are you? i miss your cheerful voice. ^ ^
today is an ellection day in Korea, but our ceo annouced that we have to work even though it is an ellection day. instead of day off,he offers put back the time which come to work about 2 hours. so i started my work from 10 AM.
i didin't vote today. to be honestly, i don't have any concern in political. instead of go to ellecte, i choose a oversleeping. but when i wake up this moring. i regret to give up my right.
there is no use crying after split the milk. i lost my chance. but i am going to do my right next time.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!!
It's nice to hear from you again!! See you later in our class!!! I miss you dear!!!
Lei J
Good morning. Lei.~ it's me .
>>correct!!
i am back from long blank.>>correct!!
>>I'm back from a long break (>>better)
yesterday, i had an appointment at lunch break too.
>>correct!!
so i postponed our class again. >>correct!!
Anyways. how are you?
>>correct!!
i miss your cheerful voice. ^ ^>>correct!!
today is an ellection day in Korea, but our ceo annouced that we have to work even though it is an ellection day.
>>today is our election day in Korea, but our CEO announced that we have to work even though it is our election day.
instead of day off, he offers put back the time which come to work about 2 hours.
>>instead of having a day off, he offered me to offset the day that I worked for only 2 hours.
so i started my work from 10 AM.>>correct!!
i didin't vote today.
>>I didn't vote today
to be honestly, i don't have any concern in political.
>>to be honest, I am not really interested with politics.
instead of go to ellecte, i choose a oversleeping.
>>instead of participating in the lection, I decided to oevrsleep.
but when i wake up this morning.
>>correct!!
i regret to give up my right. >>correct!!
there is no use crying after split the milk.
>>there is no use crying over a spilled milk.
i lost my chance.
>>correct!!
but i am going to do my right next time.
>>but I am going to practice my right next time.
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