I am definitely not a shopaholic, although I like shopping. I often go to department stores or big d

2015-05-05 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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I am definitely not a shopaholic, although I like shopping.I often go to big discount stores just for fun, even though I do not have anything to buy. I feel excited to see things that draw my attention. A problem is that I tend to buy things that are not on my shopping list. Most people like to shop at least a little and not all the people who go out on a spending sprees are addicted to shopping. Some can go out and spend moderately or even a bit more than moderately and still not be considered addicts. A real problems is that compulsive shopping can be a disorder. The excessive need that shopaholics feel for the “pick me up” that comes from shopping can lead to an overabundance of purchases, typically that have little or no need or necessity for the shopper. Addicted shoppers just don’t feel good until they have over-gone their limit when shopping. Many excessive shoppers will compulsively spend hundreds of dollars before realizing that they have a problem and need help.

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Hi Sir [이름]!
How are you doing today?
I hope you are having a great time with your family.
How\'s your daughter? Did she receive lots of presents? 
There are people who are really addicted to shopping,
Have you heard about a story that a person had a lot of debts because of shopping. 
Do you usually use your credit card or you pay in cash when you go to the department store? 
Share more of your ideas in class. Talk to you tomorrow.
Have a great night ahead of you.
Teacher Nina 

I am definitely not a shopaholic, although I like shopping.
>> correct 
I often go to big discount stores just for fun, even though I do not have anything to buy. 
>> correct 
I feel excited to see things that draw my attention. 
>> correct 
A problem is that I tend to buy things that are not on my shopping list. 
>> correct 
Most people like to shop at least a little and not all the people who go out on a spending sprees are addicted to shopping. 
>> correct 
Some can go out and spend moderately or even a bit more than moderately and still not be considered addicts. 
>> correct 
A real problems is that compulsive shopping can be a disorder. 
>> A real problem is that compulsive shopping can be a disorder. 
The excessive need that shopaholics feel for the “pick me up” that comes from shopping can lead to an overabundance of purchases, typically that have little or no need or necessity for the shopper. 
>> correct 
>> The excessive need that shopaholics feel for the “pick me up” that comes from shopping can lead to an overabundance of purchases, typically that might be less or unnecessary for the shopper. 
Addicted shoppers just don’t feel good until they have over-gone their limit when shopping. 
>> correct 
Many excessive shoppers will compulsively spend hundreds of dollars before realizing that they have a problem and need help.
>> correct 

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