I am excited when I see the violence in TV.

2019-01-28 · 첨삭 강사 Rosie

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TV movie is exciting for me to see in my small room. Violence is prohibited in the real world but it is widely on air in the TV. Anyway it\'s fun and interesting. The TV movie that I am used to watching is action movie and that is related to future technology like computer science. And I usually watch the foreign movie. Thanks for reading. Bye.

강사 첨삭

Hello, Wee!

Thank you so much for doing your homework ^^

I hope you are having a great night ☺

TV movie is exciting for me to see in my small room.

>> It is exciting for me to watch movies on TV in my small room.

Violence is prohibited in the real world but it is widely on air in the TV.

>> Violence is prohibited in the real world but it is widely aired on TV.

Anyway it\'s fun and interesting.

>> Anyway, it\'s fun and interesting.

The TV movie that I am used to watching is action movie and that is related to future technology like computer science.

>> The movie that I am used to watching is action movie and that is related to future technology like computer science.

And I usually watch the foreign movie.

>> Also, I usually watch foreign movies.

Thanks for reading.
Bye.

>> CORRECT

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