I am free day on monday
학생이 쓴 원문
Hellow
I am free day tomorrow
My factory aren't worked
I will enjoy my life, I will ride bycycle tomorrow
My co-workers ride bycycle also but I don't like to ride with lot of
co-workers.
I enjoy to ride bycycle hardly.
If a lot people go to ride bycycle, I cann't ride hardly
After I ride bycycle, I will repair my mtb bike
I look forware to be pleasure
Have nice day!
강사 첨삭
Hello Mr. [Name]!
Thank you so much for writing a composition for me! I'm happy to know that it's your free day today. You deserve to have some rest today. I hope that you'll be able to spend your day wisely. Have fun!
T. Jane ^^
Hellow
>> Hello!I am free day tomorrow
>> It's my day off tomorrow.
>> I am free tomorrow.My factory aren't worked
>> My factory isn't opening.I will enjoy my life, I will ride bycycle tomorrow
>> I will enjoy my life by riding a bicycle tomorrow.My co-workers ride bycycle also but I don't like to ride with lot of co-workers.
>> My co-workers will also ride a bicycle tomorrow but I don't like to ride with lots of co-workers.I enjoy to ride bycycle hardly.
>> I enjoy riding a bicycle so hard.If a lot people go to ride bycycle, I cann't ride hardly
>> If lots of people ride a bicycle, I can't ride it so hard.After I ride bycycle, I will repair my mtb bike
>> After riding my bicycle, I will repair my MTB bike.I look forware to be pleasure
>> I am looking forward to having fun.Have nice day!
>> Have a nice day!
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