I am free day on monday

2010-11-15 · 첨삭 강사 Jane

학생이 쓴 원문

Hellow I am free day tomorrow My factory aren't worked I will enjoy my life, I will ride bycycle tomorrow My co-workers ride bycycle also but I don't like to ride with lot of co-workers. I enjoy to ride bycycle hardly. If a lot people go to ride bycycle, I cann't ride hardly After I ride bycycle, I will repair my mtb bike I look forware to be pleasure Have nice day!

강사 첨삭

Hello Mr. [Name]! Thank you so much for writing a composition for me! I'm happy to know that it's your free day today. You deserve to have some rest today. I hope that you'll be able to spend your day wisely. Have fun! T. Jane ^^ Hellow >> Hello!I am free day tomorrow >> It's my day off tomorrow. >> I am free tomorrow.My factory aren't worked >> My factory isn't opening.I will enjoy my life, I will ride bycycle tomorrow >> I will enjoy my life by riding a bicycle tomorrow.My co-workers ride bycycle also but I don't like to ride with lot of co-workers. >> My co-workers will also ride a bicycle tomorrow but I don't like to ride with lots of co-workers.I enjoy to ride bycycle hardly. >> I enjoy riding a bicycle so hard.If a lot people go to ride bycycle, I cann't ride hardly >> If lots of people ride a bicycle, I can't ride it so hard.After I ride bycycle, I will repair my mtb bike >> After riding my bicycle, I will repair my MTB bike.I look forware to be pleasure >> I am looking forward to having fun.Have nice day! >> Have a nice day!

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