I am going to work out from tomorrow
학생이 쓴 원문
From tomorrow, I will take a muscle training course. I got back, neck pain and even ankle pain. My life isn\'t that easy like others. If I pick up some stuff from the floor, I have to lie down a bed for the last whole day. It means, I don\'t feel any confident of my life. Especially nowadays I am planning to go abroad and work as a full timer because of visa condition. But from the giving birth my sons, I haven\'t been working to earn money almost 10 years. So I am a little bit worried to work full time. So I paid money for the training course. I need energy and muscle for taking some postures. I can recover my body by myself. For the rest of my life, I will be a strong and healthy woman. Hang on myself!
강사 첨삭
Hello, Ms. [Name]! I\'m rooting for you! I hope all your hard work pays off soon. Let\'s be optimistic!
-T. Sonny
From tomorrow, I will take a muscle training course.
>>Correct!
I got back, neck pain and even ankle pain.
>>I got back, neck pain, and even ankle pain.
My life isn\'t that easy like others.
>>Correct!
If I pick up some stuff from the floor, I have to lie down a bed for the last whole day.
>>If I pick up some stuff from the floor, I have to lie on the bed for the rest of the day.
It means, I don\'t feel any confident of my life.
>>It means, I don\'t feel any confidence in my life.
Especially nowadays I am planning to go abroad and work as a full timer because of visa condition.
>>Especially nowadays I am planning to go abroad and work as a full-timer because of visa conditions.
But from the giving birth my sons, I haven\'t been working to earn money almost 10 years.
>>But since giving birth to my sons, I haven\'t earned money for almost 10 years.
So I am a little bit worried to work full time.
>>So I am a little bit worried about working full-time.
So I paid money for the training course.
>>So, I paid for the training course.
I need energy and muscle for taking some postures.
>>I need energy and muscle to do some postures.
I can recover my body by myself.
>>I can recover my body on my own
For the rest of my life, I will be a strong and healthy woman.
>>Correct!
Hang on myself!
>>Hang in there, self!
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