I am good at making flim.
학생이 쓴 원문
I don't have special skil.
but Im intersted in making film.
When I was in academy, I joined to circle of making film.
unlike anyother boys and girls, I joined in the middle of academy.
I always dreamed making film but it was not easy to do both of studying and making film. so I joined the circle when I was senior grade.
Many people liked my movie clip, I was happy about it.
If I have enough time in airforce, I would like to make film too.
and I want to make real movie in my life time.
To prepare making movie, I have done for it.
I sometime dream about something and these are favulous thing to make movie.
When I woke up, I wrote that to the note.
So don't forget my dream.
It will be the source of my movie script
강사 첨삭
Hi there(^^,)
Thank you so much for doing your homework today.
I know that you are doing your best in studying.
I really appreciate how you express your ideas in our class.
If you have any queries please don\'t hesitate to ask.
I am very proud of you.
Be thoughtful always and have faith.
Have a wonderful day ahead.
Take care always.
T. Nina^^I don\'t have special skil.
>> I don\'t have special skills.
but Im intersted in making film.
>> But I\'m interested in making films.
When I was in academy, I joined to circle of making film.
>> When I was in academy, I joined a film making circle.
unlike anyother boys and girls, I joined in the middle of academy.
>> Unlike any other boys and girls, I joined in the middle of academy.
I always dreamed making film but it was not easy to do both of studying and making film.
>> I always dreamt/dreamed of making a film but it is not easy to do both, studying and making a film.
so I joined the circle when I was senior grade.
>> So, I joined the circle when I was a senior.
Many people liked my movie clip, I was happy about it.
>> Many people liked my movie clip and I was happy about it.
If I have enough time in airforce, I would like to make film too.
>> If I have enough time in the air force, I would like to make a film, too.
and I want to make real movie in my life time.
>> I would like to make a real movie in my life time.
To prepare making movie, I have done for it.
>> I need to prepare in making a movie.
I sometime dream about something and these are favulous thing to make movie.
>> I sometimes dream about fabulous things to put on my movie.
When I woke up, I wrote that to the note.
>> When I wake up, I take a note.
So don\'t forget my dream.
>> So that I won\'t forget my dreams.
It will be the source of my movie script
>> That will be the source of my movie script.
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