I am good at making flim.

2014-01-06 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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I don't have special skil. but Im intersted in making film. When I was in academy, I joined to circle of making film. unlike anyother boys and girls, I joined in the middle of academy. I always dreamed making film but it was not easy to do both of studying and making film. so I joined the circle when I was senior grade. Many people liked my movie clip, I was happy about it. If I have enough time in airforce, I would like to make film too. and I want to make real movie in my life time. To prepare making movie, I have done for it. I sometime dream about something and these are favulous thing to make movie. When I woke up, I wrote that to the note. So don't forget my dream. It will be the source of my movie script

강사 첨삭

Hi there(^^,) Thank you so much for doing your homework today. I know that you are doing your best in studying. I really appreciate how you express your ideas in our class. If you have any queries please don\'t hesitate to ask. I am very proud of you. Be thoughtful always and have faith. Have a wonderful day ahead. Take care always. T. Nina^^I don\'t have special skil. >> I don\'t have special skills. but Im intersted in making film. >> But I\'m interested in making films. When I was in academy, I joined to circle of making film. >> When I was in academy, I joined a film making circle. unlike anyother boys and girls, I joined in the middle of academy. >> Unlike any other boys and girls, I joined in the middle of academy. I always dreamed making film but it was not easy to do both of studying and making film. >> I always dreamt/dreamed of making a film but it is not easy to do both, studying and making a film. so I joined the circle when I was senior grade. >> So, I joined the circle when I was a senior. Many people liked my movie clip, I was happy about it. >> Many people liked my movie clip and I was happy about it. If I have enough time in airforce, I would like to make film too. >> If I have enough time in the air force, I would like to make a film, too. and I want to make real movie in my life time. >> I would like to make a real movie in my life time. To prepare making movie, I have done for it. >> I need to prepare in making a movie. I sometime dream about something and these are favulous thing to make movie. >> I sometimes dream about fabulous things to put on my movie. When I woke up, I wrote that to the note. >> When I wake up, I take a note. So don\'t forget my dream. >> So that I won\'t forget my dreams. It will be the source of my movie script >> That will be the source of my movie script.

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