I am happy friday
학생이 쓴 원문
I am happy day.
I have done a lot of work this week. so I am very tired and exhausted.
I need to rest.
so I will work at noon and going to fishing afternoon.
but I have one worry. I went to that place before 2 weeks whth my wife .
My wife caught many big fish but I could`t catch . That day was terrible. so I am worry.
That place is maked by wood. and have a roof. and float on the sea.
강사 첨삭
Hello Sir John. Thank you for this. Enjoy fishing then and hopefully you catch a lot today.
- T. Beth
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I am happy day.>>> I am having a happy day.
>>> OR: This is a happy day.
I have done a lot of work this week so I am very tired and exhausted.
I have done a lot of work this week so I am very tired and exhausted.
>>> correct
I need to rest.
>>> correct
so I will work at noon and going to fishing afternoon.
so I will work at noon and going to fishing afternoon.
>>> So I will work until noon and go fishing in the afternoon.
but I have one worry.
but I have one worry.
>>> But I worry about one thing.
I went to that place before 2 weeks whth my wife .
>>> I went to that place 2 weeks ago with my wife.
My wife caught many big fish but I could`t catch .
My wife caught many big fish but I could`t catch .
>>> My wife caught many big fishes but I could`t catch any.
That day was terrible. so I am worry.
>>> That day was terrible so I am worried.
That place is maked by wood. and have a roof. and float on the sea.
That place is maked by wood. and have a roof. and float on the sea.
>>> That place was built from woods, has a roof and floats on the sea.
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