I am happy now.

2018-11-20 · 첨삭 강사 Rosie

학생이 쓴 원문

I don't worry about my future or be in a miserable situation. I always work hard according to my creeds which I have learned through my life. I am expecting your class very much. Today the weather is cold than thoughts. Be careful not to catch a cold. Somedays ago, I got a new smart phone, which is nice to play with in these cold weather. Thanks for reading. Bye.

강사 첨삭

Hello, Wee!

Thank you so much for doing your homework ^^

I hope you are having a great day!

Talk to you tomorrow ☺


I don\'t worry about my future or be in a miserable situation.
>> I don\'t worry about my future nor being in a miserable situation.


I always work hard according to my creeds which I have learned through my life.
>> I always work hard according to my creeds which I have learned all through my life.


I am expecting your class very much.
>> I am always looking forward to attending your class.


Today the weather is cold than thoughts.

>> Today, the weather is colder than my thoughts.


Be careful not to catch a cold.
>> CORRECT


Somedays ago, I got a new smart phone, which is nice to play with in these cold weather.
>> A few days ago, I got a new smartphone which is nice for playing in this cold weather.


Thanks for reading.
Bye.

>> CORRECT 

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