I am in the middle of woods
학생이 쓴 원문
I really love my neighborhood. There are so many trees around my house that make the air fresh and clean. I am surrounded by parks, mountains,quiet streets, and even a river,which make me feel so peaceful and relaxing.
In the morning, I often wake up to the sound of birds singing, and I can feel the freshness of nature.
The calm atmosphere makes me feel grateful to live here.
Living in this neighborhood gives me a deep sense of happiness and reminds me how important it is to stay close to nature.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Ms. [Name]! It’s easy to see why living there brings you happiness. Being close to nature has a powerful effect on our well-being. It helps reduce stress, clears the mind, and makes us feel more grounded. It’s wonderful that you recognize and appreciate that. Thanks for sharing!
-T. Sonny
Writing tips: Add space after commas and a comma before “which”. Also, \"Relaxing\" describes the environment; \"relaxed\" describes how you feel.
I really love my neighborhood.
>>Correct!
There are so many trees around my house that make the air fresh and clean.
>>Correct!
I am surrounded by parks, mountains,quiet streets, and even a river,which make me feel so peaceful and relaxing.
>>I am surrounded by parks, mountains, quiet streets, and even a river, which makes me feel so peaceful and relaxed.
In the morning, I often wake up to the sound of birds singing, and I can feel the freshness of nature.
In the morning, I often wake up to the sound of birds singing, and I can feel the freshness of nature.
>>Correct!
The calm atmosphere makes me feel grateful to live here.
>>Correct!
Living in this neighborhood gives me a deep sense of happiness and reminds me how important it is to stay close to nature.
>>Correct!
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