I am learning 'Interview 2'
학생이 쓴 원문
Oh...It's so difiicult for me.
I was surprised when I saw a text book because it is different from
previous text book.
I just talk with you freely before but now I can't any more.
yeah I know interview is not easy thing.
Because I need to tell about my strong points and potential.
As you might be aware, my job, secretary, is not only my first
position but also unsuitible work for me.
So I feel that It is useful for me desired another job.
so I'll try harder than before.
Definitely I need to tell something using full and long sentences.
Anyway I am nearly broke because of Gaettong, my car.
Her battery discharged entirely so I had to change that.
And It cost about 10,0000 [이름].
Oh my~~ What a bittersweet car. but I love her~!! ^^
강사 첨삭
Hi J! Oh, I am sorry to hear about Gaettong. You know, that is one thing about having a car. It gives a lot of convenience but once something bad happened to them you will also inconvenience. But it's okay. You can earn that money again but it's hard to replace Gaettong I know how special she is to you. Cheer up!
Lei J
Oh...It's so difiicult for me.
>>correct
I was surprised when I saw a text book because it is different from previous text book.
>>I was surprised the first time I saw our new textbook because it was different from the first one.
I just talk with you freely before but now I can't any more.
>>correct
yeah I know interview is not easy thing.
>>correct
Because I need to tell about my strong points and potentials.
>>correct
As you might be aware, my job, secretary, is not only my first position but also unsuitible work for me.
?lt;/span>>>As you already know, I work as a secretary and it is my first job and I find it an unsuitable job.
So I feel that It is useful for me desired another job.
>>So I feel like changing another job.
>>So I think that's the reason why I desired for a different job.
so I'll try harder than before.
>>I'm trying harder than before.
Definitely I need to tell something using full and long sentences.
>>Definitely, I need to express my thoughts using full and long sentences.
Anyway I am nearly broke because of Gaettong, my car.
>>correct
Her battery discharged entirely so I had to change that.
>>Her battery was totally discharged and I have to change that.
And It costs about 10,0000 [이름].
>>correct
Oh my~~ What a bittersweet car. but I love her~!! ^^
>>correct
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