I am learning 'Interview 2'

2011-01-12 · 첨삭 강사 lei

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Oh...It's so difiicult for me. I was surprised when I saw a text book because it is different from previous text book. I just talk with you freely before but now I can't any more. yeah I know interview is not easy thing. Because I need to tell about my strong points and potential. As you might be aware, my job, secretary, is not only my first position but also unsuitible work for me. So I feel that It is useful for me desired another job. so I'll try harder than before. Definitely I need to tell something using full and long sentences. Anyway I am nearly broke because of Gaettong, my car. Her battery discharged entirely so I had to change that. And It cost about 10,0000 [이름]. Oh my~~ What a bittersweet car. but I love her~!! ^^

강사 첨삭

Hi J! Oh, I am sorry to hear about Gaettong. You know, that is one thing about having a car. It gives a lot of convenience but once something bad happened to them you will also inconvenience. But it's okay. You can earn that money again but it's hard to replace Gaettong I know how special she is to you. Cheer up! Lei J   Oh...It's so difiicult for me. >>correct I was surprised when I saw a text book because it is different from previous text book. >>I was surprised the first time I saw our new textbook because it was different from the first one. I just talk with you freely before but now I can't any more. >>correct yeah I know interview is not easy thing. >>correct Because I need to tell about my strong points and potentials. >>correct As you might be aware, my job, secretary, is not only my first position but also unsuitible work for me. ?lt;/span>>>As you already know, I work as a secretary and it is my first job and I find it an unsuitable job. So I feel that It is useful for me desired another job. >>So I feel like changing another job. >>So I think that's the reason why I desired for a different job. so I'll try harder than before. >>I'm trying harder than before. Definitely I need to tell something using full and long sentences. >>Definitely, I need to express my thoughts using full and long sentences. Anyway I am nearly broke because of Gaettong, my car. >>correct Her battery discharged entirely so I had to change that. >>Her battery was totally discharged and I have to change that. And It costs about 10,0000 [이름]. >>correct Oh my~~ What a bittersweet car. but I love her~!! ^^ >>correct

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