I am living alone although I live with my parents.
학생이 쓴 원문
My family has four members. Me and my younger brother and mother and father. Total is four.
Our family is simple like that.
Conflict is hard to occur in my family because of its small members.
I like doing computer.
My brother is expected to buy his own computer.
And I am doing my computer in my home on my own.
So there can\'t be a possiblity of conflict.
Thanks for reading.
Bye.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]. Thank you for answering your homework. You\'re doing it beautifully! ^_^
My family has four members. Me and my younger brother and mother and father. Total is four.
>>> My family has four members which consist of my younger brother, mother, father and myself.
Our family is simple like that.
>>>Our family is simply like that.
Conflict is hard to occur in my family because of its small members.
>>>Conflicts hardly to occur in my family because of its few members.
I like doing computer.
>>>I like using a computer.
My brother is expected to buy his own computer.
>>>My brother is expected to buy his own computer soon.
And I am doing my computer in my home on my own.
>>>And I am using my computer alone at home.
So there can\'t be a possiblity of conflict.
>>>So there\'s no possibility of any conflict.
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