I am missing my school.
학생이 쓴 원문
Despite of convenience of the online class, I miss my school life so much. The first reason is that the quality of classes is not sufficient as face-to-face class. Also, I miss a gathering with my friends, I usually spent my spare time with them. I ate the lunch with them, I did my homework with them, and I hung out with them after school. So I fell lonely when I am alone after the class. Lastly, I miss the club activities which made me always happy.
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Hi [이름]. Thanks for sharing. :)
-T.Gabby :)
Despite of convenience of the online class, I miss my school life so much.
>> Despite of the convenience of online classes, I miss my school life so much.
The first reason is that the quality of classes is not sufficient as face-to-face class.
>> The first reason is that the quality of classes is not sufficient compare with a face-to-face class.
Also, I miss a gathering with my friends, I usually spent my spare time with them.
>> Correct.
I ate the lunch with them, I did my homework with them, and I hung out with them after school.
>> Correct.
So I fell lonely when I am alone after the class.
>> Correct.
Lastly, I miss the club activities which made me always happy.
>> Correct.
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