I am mother
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi Gabby!
Just I think I am called a mother these days.
Because I don\'t have work for them. But I think it is importance a position mother.
The children got growing up a adult.
They do their a thing themselves. Ah, I give money still to son. He is a student yet.
When they were children, I was hard. Because I had to make food for them. I don\'t talent of make food.
But I grew 2 children. I think it marvelous really.
I was her driver of my daughter when she was a student.
When she taken a driver\'s license, I got free.
Our national give driver\'s license test chance from 19 age.
I much fought running highway with her.
We each other were angry because she got golfscore low.
Oneday, her friend fall because it was stress.
Since, what I did thinking for her.
I realized important of her happy. It is unimportant of social success.
It get our happy. I think it.
Bye bye. See you tomorrow.
강사 첨삭
Hi Suzan. Great job! :)
- T. Gabby
Hi Gabby!
>> Correct.
Just I think I am called a mother these days.
>> I am a mother.
Because I don\'t have work for them. But I think it is importance a position mother.
>> I don\'t work but I think that my role as a mother is more important.
The children got growing up a adult.
>> My children are grown ups now.
They do their a thing themselves. Ah, I give money still to son. He is a student yet.
>> They are independent now but my son is still a student and I still give him money.
When they were children, I was hard. Because I had to make food for them. I don\'t talent of make food.
>> When they were little it was hard for me because I don\'t cook.
But I grew 2 children. I think it marvelous really.
>> But I was able to raise 2 marvelous children.
I was her driver of my daughter when she was a student.
>> I was the driver of my daughter when she was still a student.
When she taken a driver\'s license, I got free.
>> When she got her driver\'s license, I stopped driving for her.
Our national give driver\'s license test chance from 19 age.
>> Our government gave driver\'s license test for 19 years old and up.
I much fought running highway with her.
>> We fought because she drove fast on the highway.
We each other were angry because she got golfscore low.
>> I got mad at her when she got a low score in golf.
Oneday, her friend fall because it was stress.
>> One day, her friend fainted because of stress.
Since, what I did thinking for her.
>> Since then, I think of her more.
I realized important of her happy. It is unimportant of social success.
>> I realized that her happiness is more important than success.
It get our happy. I think it.
>> We are happier now I think.
Bye bye. See you tomorrow.
>> Correct.
- T. Gabby
Hi Gabby!
>> Correct.
Just I think I am called a mother these days.
>> I am a mother.
Because I don\'t have work for them. But I think it is importance a position mother.
>> I don\'t work but I think that my role as a mother is more important.
The children got growing up a adult.
>> My children are grown ups now.
They do their a thing themselves. Ah, I give money still to son. He is a student yet.
>> They are independent now but my son is still a student and I still give him money.
When they were children, I was hard. Because I had to make food for them. I don\'t talent of make food.
>> When they were little it was hard for me because I don\'t cook.
But I grew 2 children. I think it marvelous really.
>> But I was able to raise 2 marvelous children.
I was her driver of my daughter when she was a student.
>> I was the driver of my daughter when she was still a student.
When she taken a driver\'s license, I got free.
>> When she got her driver\'s license, I stopped driving for her.
Our national give driver\'s license test chance from 19 age.
>> Our government gave driver\'s license test for 19 years old and up.
I much fought running highway with her.
>> We fought because she drove fast on the highway.
We each other were angry because she got golfscore low.
>> I got mad at her when she got a low score in golf.
Oneday, her friend fall because it was stress.
>> One day, her friend fainted because of stress.
Since, what I did thinking for her.
>> Since then, I think of her more.
I realized important of her happy. It is unimportant of social success.
>> I realized that her happiness is more important than success.
It get our happy. I think it.
>> We are happier now I think.
Bye bye. See you tomorrow.
>> Correct.
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