I am [Name]
학생이 쓴 원문
I am married two years ago.
My life is chanded from the day.
I have a 18-months baby, and I am pregnant now, also I am working.
Everyday is busy. There are many family schedules.
In this weekend, after attending cousin's wedding, I go mother-in-law's house and sleep over. She likes us coming on the weekend and sleeping over together. Sometimes I need time to step back and have time alone.
I've never regreted my marriage, on a second thought, I can understand that people are putting off marriage or not getting marriged at all.
강사 첨삭
Hey [이름], CONGRATULATIONS! a new belssing is coming your way I'm happy for you.. take extra care yourself, okay?
enjoy your weekend!
I am married two years ago.
>> I got married two years ago.My life is chanded from the day.
>>My life has changed since that day.I have a 18-months baby, and I am pregnant now, also I am working.
>>I have an 18-month old baby, and I am pregnant again, and I am working at the same time.
>> I have an 18-month old baby, and another one is on the way, ....Everyday is busy. There are many family schedules.
>>Everyday is a busy day. There are many family affairs.
In this weekend, after attending cousin's wedding, I go mother-in-law's house and sleep over. She likes us coming on the weekend and sleeping over together.
>> This weekend, after attending my cousins wedding, we will be going to my mother-in-law's house and sleep over/ we will be going to my mother-in-law's house and spend the night there. She likes us visiting and sleeping over on weekends.
Sometimes I need time to step back and have time alone.
>>correctI've never regreted my marriage, on a second thought, I can understand that people are putting off marriage or not getting marriged at all.
>> I never regreted getting married, on a second thought, I understand why people put off their marriages or why they don't get married at all.
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