I am [Name]

2010-03-26 · 첨삭 강사 Bianca

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I am married two years ago. My life is chanded from the day. I have a 18-months baby, and I am pregnant now, also I am working. Everyday is busy. There are many family schedules. In this weekend, after attending cousin's wedding, I go mother-in-law's house and sleep over. She likes us coming on the weekend and sleeping over together. Sometimes I need time to step back and have time alone. I've never regreted my marriage, on a second thought, I can understand that people are putting off marriage or not getting marriged at all.

강사 첨삭

Hey [이름], CONGRATULATIONS! a new belssing is coming your way  I'm happy for you.. take extra care yourself, okay? enjoy your weekend!     I am married two years ago. >> I got married two years ago.My life is chanded from the day. >>My life has changed since that day.I have a 18-months baby, and I am pregnant now, also I am working. >>I have an 18-month old baby, and I am pregnant again, and I am working at the same time. >> I have an 18-month old baby, and another one is on the way, ....Everyday is busy. There are many family schedules. >>Everyday is a busy day. There are many family affairs. In this weekend, after attending cousin's wedding, I go mother-in-law's house and sleep over. She likes us coming on the weekend and sleeping over together. >> This weekend, after attending my cousins wedding, we will be going to my mother-in-law's house and sleep over/ we will be going to my mother-in-law's house and spend the night there. She likes us visiting and sleeping over on weekends. Sometimes I need time to step back and have time alone. >>correctI've never regreted my marriage, on a second thought, I can understand that people are putting off marriage or not getting marriged at all. >> I never regreted getting married, on a second thought, I understand why people put off their marriages or why they don't get married at all.

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