I am [Name] man.

Two days ago, I found my skin was weird. Only looking at that, I feel terrible. There has been the symptom since 2017. At first, I thought it is natural phenomenon so I ignored that. But that symptom triggered reddish and itch, i can't be impatient that i used the ointment. To make matters worse, the long span of using that ointment weaken my skin so that it lose plasticity and become striae distensae. Knowing that truth, I became upset to military doctors prescribing those ointment and not noting side effects. I told my boss that on line. At late night, my boss came to me and asked about my symptoms and listened to me. I was moved to him. At the next morning, I went to dermatology with my boss and realized my symptom isn't serious and be cured with a lotion. I am lucky man because my skin will be healthy in applying a lotion and I have a thoughtful boss to look after us. I have a month left to stay here. Health is most important. With these people, I will pass the span left well.

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Teacher ELLY.

I am [Name] man.

>>I am a lucky man.

Two days ago, I found my skin was weird.

>>Two days ago, I discovered that my skin looked weird.

Only looking at that, I feel terrible.

>>Just by looking at it, I already felt terrible.

There has been the symptom since 2017.

>>This symptom has started since 2017.

At first, I thought it is natural phenomenon so I ignored that.

>>At first, I thought it was just a natural occurrence, so I ignored it.

But that symptom triggered reddish and itch,

But the symptom was triggered and it became reddish and itchy,

i can\'t be impatient that i used the ointment.

>>I was impatient so that I used an ointment.

To make matters worse, the long span of using that ointment weaken my skin so that it lose plasticity and become striae distensae.

>>To make matters worse, due to the long span of using this particular ointment, it weakened my skin so that it lost its plasticity and turned into a skin condition called striae distensae.

Knowing that truth, I became upset to military doctors prescribing those ointment and not noting side effects.

>>Having known this truth, I became very upset with the military doctors prescribing this ointment and not informing me about the side effects.

I told my boss that on line.

>>I told my boss about it online.

>>I told my boss about it over a phone line.

At late night, my boss came to me and asked about my symptoms and listened to me.

>>Late at night, my boss came and asked about my symptoms. He listened to me attentively.

I was moved to him.

>>I was moved by him and his gesture.

At the next morning, I went to dermatology with my boss and realized my symptom isn\'t serious and be cured with a lotion.

>>The next morning, I went to a dermatologist with my boss and I realized that my symptom wasn\'t serious but can be cured with a lotion.

I am lucky man because my skin will be healthy in applying a lotion and I have a thoughtful boss to look after us.

>>I am a lucky man because my skin will be healthy just by applying a lotion and I have a thoughtful boss who looks after us.

I have a month left to stay here.

CORRECT!

or>>I still have to stay here for a month.

Health is most important.

>>Health is the most important.

With these people, I will pass the span left well. 

>>With these people, I will pass the time left well.