ㅜㅜ i am nervous for your class today
학생이 쓴 원문
hello teacher i am sang wook
my head is white when i call cellphone teacher today
because i am not study these days
ㅜㅜ school suject will examine as soon as
etc ...... so i am headache bye would you my story revised?
강사 첨삭
Hello Sangwook,
First of all, you don\'t have to say \"I am [Name]\" all the time. I have already met you so it is not needed. You only introduce yourself if I haven\'t met you yet. If you want to announce yourself, check out the correction I made.
Additionally, \"white\" cannot be used as an adjective unless you explain more on what you mean by it.
WHITE = (1)흰, 흰색의, 하얀, (2)백인의, (3) 피부가 하얗게 질린, 창백한
Now, what do you mean by \"my head is white\"? because literally it is \"내 머리는 흰색이다\".
All good things,
==Teacher Charlie==
hello teacher i am sang wook
>> Hello teacher, this is Sangwook writing to you.
my head is white when i call cellphone teacher today because i am not study these days
>>DO YOU MEAN: My mind went blank when I called my teacher\'s cellphone today because I haven\'t studied much these days.
ㅜㅜ school suject will examine as soon asetc ...... so i am headache
>> The school exams are coming soon so I have a headache.
>>OR: The school exams are coming soon so I am stressed.
bye
>> I\'ll talk to you soon.
would you my story revised?
>> Could you please correct my composition?
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