I am not a elemenatary school teacher. Maybe I will be in the future.
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Hello, Wee!
Good evening ☺
Thank you for doing your homework ^^
I hope you are having a great night ☺
In my neighborhood, there are lots of kids who are going to school.
>> CORRECT
>> OR: There are a lot of students in my neighborhood.
I have never been to talk to them as I thought.
>> I have never talked to them as far as I can remember.
Kids are taught to do their duty in their school by their teacher.
>> Kids are taught to do their duties in their schools by their teachers.
I don\'t think too much about certain person moreover who I don\'t know well enough.
>> I don\'t think too much about certain people or strangers.
Korea is a courteous country from the old times.
>> Korea is the country of courteous from the old times.
Thanks for reading.
Bye.
>> CORRECT
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