I am not a elemenatary school teacher. Maybe I will be in the future.

2019-01-17 · 첨삭 강사 Rosie

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In my neighborhood, there are lots of kids who are going to school. I have never been to talk to them as I thought. Kids are taught to do their duty in their school by their teacher. I don\'t think too much about certain person moreover who I don\'t know well enough. Korea is a courteous country from the old times. Thanks for reading. Bye.

강사 첨삭

Hello, Wee!

Good evening ☺

Thank you for doing your homework ^^

I hope you are having a great night ☺


In my neighborhood, there are lots of kids who are going to school.

>> CORRECT

>> OR: There are a lot of students in my neighborhood.


I have never been to talk to them as I thought.

>> I have never talked to them as far as I can remember.


Kids are taught to do their duty in their school by their teacher. 

>> Kids are taught to do their duties in their schools by their teachers. 


I don\'t think too much about certain person moreover who I don\'t know well enough.

>> I don\'t think too much about certain people or strangers.


Korea is a courteous country from the old times.

>> Korea is the country of courteous from the old times.


Thanks for reading.
Bye.

>> CORRECT

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