I am not a woman but a man who can change the world.

2019-04-08 · 첨삭 강사 Rosie

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Healing is a job that belongs to women. Of course there are many man healers. They are all engaged to hospital. We can heal the world by recycling the gabages. I sometimes clean up my room gabage can myself. Thanks for reading. Bye.

강사 첨삭

Hello, Wee!

Thanks for doing your homework ^^

I hope you are having a great night ☺

Healing is a job that belongs to women.
>> CORRECT

Of course there are many man healers.
>> There are many man healers of course.

They are all engaged to hospital.
>> They all work in the hospital.

We can heal the world by recycling the gabages.
>> We can heal the world by recycling the garbage.

I sometimes clean up my room gabage can myself.
>> I sometimes clean up my room.

Thanks for reading.
Bye.

>> CORRECT

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