I am not interested a politics

2020-07-17 · 첨삭 강사 Jane

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I am not interested a politics so then I haven\'t have a opinion of political something. but I don\'t like communism I don\'t want to change our country to communism. so I think we need more strong alliance with USA

강사 첨삭

Hi, [이름]. Happy Friday! I appreciate you giving your honest opinion on this topic. And even though you are not interested in politics, I am grateful for the time and effort you spent on this homework^^ I hope you have a great weekend as you take a rest and spend time with your family. ~Teacher Jane c\",) 


I am not interested a politics so then I haven\'t have a opinion of political something.
>>> I am not interested in politics so I do not have an opinion on political issues. 

but I don\'t like communism I don\'t want to change our country to communism.
>>> But I do not like communism and I do not want to change our government to a communist one. 

so I think we need more strong alliance with USA
>>> So I think we need a stronger alliance with the USA. 

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