I am pregnant.
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강사 첨삭
Hello Miss. [Name]!
This is such an interesting composition. You wrote this very well because I barely found errors. I am so excited with this news! But at the same time, I am equally as worried about your son as you are. See you later.
Karla
A few days ago, my husband had such a strange dream.
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OR>>My husband had a weird dream a few days ago.
Many snakes coiled around him.
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OR>>Many snakes were coiled around his body.
That day he felt uncomfortable.
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OR>>That day, he was a bit uneasy.
But it's a precognitive dream about the birth of a child.
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OR>>This dream is a premonition about having a child.
I am so happy to be pregnant.
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OR>>I am delighted by the fact that I am pregnant.
But I'm a liitle worried because my baby is still young.
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OR>>On the other hand, I뭢 a bit concerned about my first baby because he뭩 still young.
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