I am pregnant.

2011-03-02 · 첨삭 강사 Karla

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A few days ago, my husband had such a strange dream. Many snakes coiled around him. That day he felt uncomfortable. But it's a precognitive dream about the birth of a child. I am so happy to be pregnant. But I'm a liitle worried because my baby is still young.

강사 첨삭

Hello Miss. [Name]!

This is such an interesting composition. You wrote this very well because I barely found errors. I am so excited with this news! But at the same time, I am equally as worried about your son as you are. See you later.

Karla

A few days ago, my husband had such a strange dream. 

>>Correct

OR>>My husband had a weird dream a few days ago.

Many snakes coiled around him. 

>>Correct

OR>>Many snakes were coiled around his body.

That day he felt uncomfortable. 

>>Correct

OR>>That day, he was a bit uneasy.

But it's a precognitive dream about the birth of a child.
>>Correct

OR>>This dream is a premonition about having a child.
I am so happy to be pregnant. 

>>Correct

OR>>I am delighted by the fact that I am pregnant.

But I'm a liitle worried because my baby is still young.

>>Correct

OR>>On the other hand, I뭢 a bit concerned about my first baby because he뭩 still young.

 

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