I am pro-choice.

2019-07-08 · 첨삭 강사 May

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I am pro-choice. If a baby is born in a hard condition, the baby will have difficult time. Also if parent isn’t ready for being parent, the family might not be happy. I don’t think fetus who is formed before some weeks are not human. That’s why I’m not agreed whit pro-life.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! Thanks for sharing your opinion. This question has been a topic in a debate.

Each side has possible and understandable opinions. It\'s just a matter of choice between

morality and practicality. Have a nice day! ^^

~~Teacher May~~

I am pro-choice.

>> I am a pro-choice.

If a baby is born in a hard condition, the baby will have difficult time.

>> If a baby is born in a hard condition, he/she will suffer.

Also if parent isn’t ready for being parent, the family might not be happy.

>> Also, if a woman isn’t ready to get parent, the family might not be happy.

I don’t think fetus who is formed before some weeks are not human.

>> I don’t think that a few weeks before a fetus is formed is not human.

That’s why I’m not agreed whit pro-life.

>> That’s why I don\'t agree with pro-life.

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