I am really care about my body condition.
학생이 쓴 원문
My skin have some trouble nowadays.
Around my neck and elbow and finger have some skin trouble.
And I care about my pet mouse. It is very cute and it\'s skin is white to be seen much clean.
It is monsoon season. We must care about our body conditions and sourroundings to avoid rain.
I am not very edgy about caring something. My belongings are all safe in my room.
Thanks for reading.
Bye.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Wee!
Thanks for doing your homework ^^
I hope you are having a great night ☺
My skin have some trouble nowadays.
>> I have skin problems nowadays.
>> I have skin problems nowadays.
Around my neck and elbow and finger have some skin trouble.
>> They\'re around my neck, elbows, and fingers.
>> They\'re around my neck, elbows, and fingers.
And I care about my pet mouse.
>> I also take care of my pet mouse.
It is very cute and it\'s skin is white to be seen much clean.
>> It\'s very cute and it\'s white and it\'s really clean.
>> It\'s very cute and it\'s white and it\'s really clean.
It is monsoon season.
>> It is the monsoon season.
We must care about our body conditions and sourroundings to avoid rain.
>> We must take care of our bodies and our surroundings.
>> We must take care of our bodies and our surroundings.
I am not very edgy about caring something.
>> I feel comfortable about taking care of things.
My belongings are all safe in my room.
>> CORRECT
>> CORRECT
Thanks for reading.
Bye.
Bye.
>> CORRECT
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