I am sad.

2014-12-11 · 첨삭 강사 Kris

학생이 쓴 원문

Homework for today. [What is your opinion about, It's better to work for someone than to work for yourself?] Three days ago, I did this homework. I don't have another idea. ^^ While I attended your class, I was happy. But I was sad because I couldn't do tongue twisters. It was very difficult. For example, I said "I taught my youngest daughter her homework.", but you were heard by me "I put my youngest daughter homework." Also I said "My boss doesn't know me", but you were heard by me "My boss didn't know me." I was sad. I will try but it is very difficult.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! ^^ Happy Friday! ^^ How are you? Well, I am sorry if heard that way, [이름]. To avoid cases like those, I would like you to enunciate  words properly, okay. Thank you, [이름]. :) By the way, I would like you to study your corrections below, okay. Take care always and have great weekend ahead, my dear. ~~Teacher Kris While I attended your class, I was happy. >>CorrectBut I was sad because I couldn\'t do tongue twisters. It was very difficult. >> CorrectFor example, I said \"I taught my youngest daughter her homework.\", but you were heard by me \"I put my youngest daughter homework.\" >> For example, I said \"I taught my youngest daughter her homework.\", but you heard, \"I put my youngest daughter homework.\"Also I said \"My boss doesn\'t know me\", but you were heard by me \"My boss didn\'t know me.\" >> Also, I said \"My boss doesn\'t know me\", but you heard, \"My boss didn\'t know me.\"I was sad.  >> CorrectI will try but it is very difficult. >> Correct

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