I am sad.
학생이 쓴 원문
Homework for today.
[What is your opinion about, It's better to work for someone than to work for yourself?]
Three days ago, I did this homework.
I don't have another idea. ^^
While I attended your class, I was happy.
But I was sad because I couldn't do tongue twisters. It was very difficult.
For example, I said "I taught my youngest daughter her homework.", but you were heard by me "I put my youngest daughter homework."
Also I said "My boss doesn't know me", but you were heard by me "My boss didn't know me."
I was sad.
I will try but it is very difficult.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! ^^
Happy Friday! ^^
How are you? Well, I am sorry if heard that way, [이름].
To avoid cases like those, I would like you to enunciate
words properly, okay. Thank you, [이름]. :)
By the way, I would like you to study your corrections below, okay.
Take care always and have great weekend ahead, my dear.
~~Teacher Kris
While I attended your class, I was happy.
>>CorrectBut I was sad because I couldn\'t do tongue twisters. It was very difficult.
>> CorrectFor example, I said \"I taught my youngest daughter her homework.\", but you were heard by me \"I put my youngest daughter homework.\"
>> For example, I said \"I taught my youngest daughter her homework.\", but you heard, \"I put my youngest daughter homework.\"Also I said \"My boss doesn\'t know me\", but you were heard by me \"My boss didn\'t know me.\"
>> Also, I said \"My boss doesn\'t know me\", but you heard, \"My boss didn\'t know me.\"I was sad.
>> CorrectI will try but it is very difficult.
>> Correct
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