I am seldom discouraged.
학생이 쓴 원문
I am always happy.
I am discouraged because of weather or someone that I havn\'t known.
I don\'t care what they are doing.
The weather discouraged people from attending. I hate the weather like this. Even though it is winter, it is not snowing.
I am not discouraged at all, on the contrary I am couraged by my prize that I won in the internet company E-trans.
Thanks for reading.
Bye.
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강사 첨삭
Good evening, [이름]!^^
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I am discouraged because of weather or someone that I havn\'t known.
>>>I am discouraged because of the weather or someone that I haven\'t met.
The weather discouraged people from attending.
>>>The weather discourages people from being present.
I am not discouraged at all, on the contrary I am couraged by my prize that I won in the internet company E-trans.
>>>I am not discouraged at all, but on the contrary I am courageous because of my prize that I won from the E-trans internet company.
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